This Was Decent You Could Use Better Vocab That Always Helps In Poetry Also Your Imagery Is Too Fast From Point To Point Try To Focus On Dropping About Something More Emotional And Vivid Describe Whats Going On In More Detail This Is A Decent First Timer Drop You Have Potential Just Work On What I Said........
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Originally Posted by Ysdat
No I wont battle you, usage of the word ducked is played. get over it Im mod........have a nice day.
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^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit?
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