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This was feedback posted for morse code
IP:
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rhyminz ya worse 'nightmare' i dont fight-fare, hit'cha below the Belt
lay ya lame raps down in ''morse code'' an they still wouldnt be felt..
-nah, youre thinkin about braille or somethin
just playin the cards lord dealt, it aint your fault u a lyrical spastic
you can call my disses blow torch, meltin ya bars like plastic
-nope, wasnt even creative
wanna see somthin drastic? read ya own text.....
u Trynna eat 'beef' ta get 'Phat' so i serve an say ''NEXT''...
-it was a personal, but it didnt hit hard at all
fuck punches, put u in a suplex, layed out on ya Back
u should give up rap...
..............talents a lost cause, like a needle in a haystack!
-meh
dudes on crack, trynna attack, an act like he own a Mic
only :thumbs up: ya verses get is if u tried ta ''Hitchike''
-ok concept, horribly worded
fuckin dyke, this pussy gets ''tampered'' with each Night
i think all ya talent ''left'' bitch so why u bother trynna ''right''?
-alright closer, could have a better setup
Morse-
you lost any gained respect, you cant add humor to a death*
THAT many mistakes? im surprised you spelled his name correct**
-ok personal
Its hunting season kid, and the buck always gets shot
your text woodnt be hot, if i sat your notepad in an oven pot
-decent, sort of played concept
heres the eveidence that shows the true side to escolayde
a fat internet loving bitch, who more than likely never gets paid
-nah
i mean, wut kinda person takes a girl to mickey dees for a date
He loves beef from BK ***, AND gave out a crew signing 1 dollar bonus rate
-pretty good personal
And it only makes sense that a fat kid, bitches and calls a FED
join military mindz, cuz in the words of troop, your wack, nuff said
-weak closer
Overall: i think Morse code took this by coming slightly more consistant with his punches and having that good personal
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