...fuck life.
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Voted For: Solo
this was a very close battle...daz this isnt any hate or anything towards your vote in my battle...
daz-good:nice werdplay, structure and closer...my fav line was the closing one...nice job in doing this verse....6/10
bad:your punches were close and hit just as hard as solos did, however you had few personals, and multies...the opener i wasnt feelin either
solo-good:had some multies but not many, like the punches they hit just as hard as daz's...nice opener and closer....also nice personals throughout...6.5/10
bad:vocab could be increased...it also seemed like your verse stayed on one topic, try to hit different areas, instead of having all your personals based on one thing
overall:
opener-s
closer-d
vocab-d
multies-s
punches/werdplay-tie
personals-s
flow-s
structure-d
v/solo
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