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Old 04-30-05, 12:30 AM   #35
morse code
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Voted For: skriptz

Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh
He said there’s something up his crack...
.................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass
6/10...decent opening line
Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard”
But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward
5/10..alright bar, not the greatest though
Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin
SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in
6/10...cool punch, kinda played though
I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you
Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you
5/10...didnt like the closer

I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef
You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf
6/10...2nd line was good
On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets
U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak
6/10..cool punches
Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks
Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet
4/10...wasnt feelin it
Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech
You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach..............
5/10...okay closer

okay i liked the way skaal ryhemed each line with the same sound, he also had good multies...skriptz i liked your punches and opener and structure and shit...here is the breakdown

opener:skriptz
closer: skaal
multies:skaal
flow:tie
vocab:tie
structure:skriptz
punches/werdplay:skriptz
personals:tie
nice battle

v/skriptz

rtf on any of my battles
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