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IP:
This was an iight peice...
You had nice structure.. good feeling..
and nice flow...you had nice flow...that
really made your verse..really stand out..
You had nice imagery...
It was an iiight drop... could have been alot better..
Next time try to use alittle more emotions..
and try to grab the concept alittle more..
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