Great piece right here in my opinion. The concept is nice, some may call it cliché or predictable but I love how you portrayed it throughout the eyes of a baby. The emotion was very strong, the helplessness, the sense of despair. The imagery was great as well, I could really picture everything, all the situations the child is going through. Vocab was excellent, found good balance between basic and complex. Kept me focussed throughout the whole piece because I was curious what was gonna happen.

Keep it up fam!

DQ

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