Voted For: l i n e .

Aight Check It..

Valor: 6/10
I Wasn't So Much Feeling The Wording of Your Peice. The Vocab Was Alright, but Your Way Too Basic With Creativity and Imagination. You Need To Work On Structure Also.

Line: 7/10
I Liked The Direction You Took With This, and The Imagery You Put Into This Verse. Your Vocabulary Is Decent and Some Lines Were Outta Place, but Besides That The Overall Feel of This Drop Wasn't Bad.

Vote: Line for better overall topical drop.

~R~

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