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Old 04-30-05, 11:50 AM   #6
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.I lay text easy... like i laid your mother with laytex rubber,
only reason is... she didn't want u having another little brother,
wtf was this, wack......
king of rv? mostly topicals... how can you ramble the verbs,
coz over 50% of the people you beat, seemed to have been herbs,
ummm this one is even wacker....rappin's like fat club its "survival of the fittest" ill give insisions,
for you to lose weight coz you lost 5-3 to deadly vision,
WTF?
i feel "restricted" to tell you bout im unde"rrated" to lose
no wonder his dick is crooked , coz this kid gets abused,
wack.....should look at his other battles to get an idea on how they flipped it
you aint "The Greatest Gift" but whats with the big chase,
coz this faggot couldn't catch me, if i was running in last place,
Wack

nothing to say you need to elevate ALOT, this verse was wack as hell
no bar was even ok.,.....and dont explain punches thats wack

3.0/10


Lay-Text:

Look I Could Say You Have Skill..but Then Rated Would Just Be Lieing..
My Punches Will Have You Going To Abuse Therapy Like Pat'O Brian..
not feeling it fam......
I Was Searching For Punches and Couldn't Find One..That's The Mystery..
Problem Is..This Is A Battle..Not A Transcript Of R-Rateds Life History..
ight
This Battles Mismatched..Check The Predictions Yo Man Check The Ratings..
Then Realize R-Rated Always Comes Before Explicit Content Statings..
like the way you flipped this, pretty good
Your Destruction Was Gifted..Right When Flow Matched Us Up Through Picks..
Because You Winning This Battle Don't Make Sense..Like Homos Without Dicks..
lol........
Like Paraplegics...Dog Theres No Possible Way You Can Stand My Weight..
Now Watch You Lose This Battle Quicker Than The U.S.'s Abortion Rate..
ight...

you had a better verse, seemed like you didnt try much, had some punchlines in there that made me laugh...overall you had a better verse, nice vocab too
next time try though hoe...

6.5/10

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