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Old 04-30-05, 12:22 PM   #28
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haha, this battle was cooo

solo, not bad man, thought your opening line was cool, but then the next line was just self-glor/played, didnt work good....i knew you would use the daz cleaner line, it was okay, kinda funny....but i think you fell off in your last two bars, closer was weak as hell, and i dont think daz wants to touch your dick, ya hear? haha, but not bad, you came out a little too basic, nothing really creative, nothing that speical, like i said, if you kept the consistency of your first two bars, you may have takin this, but nah, daz got it

daz man, hot wordplay man, mixed in with some creative punches, i was laughing at some, i think you won this based on complexity, creativity, and harder punches, you attempted more difficult text, and you made it work, it wasn't basic, it flowed nicely, good structure, multies in there, overall, it was a consistently solid verse, keep up yo

v/daz, for harder punches
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