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Old 04-30-05, 12:39 PM   #9
diman
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album fightin its way to b kool' dats da onli time its n da 'whip rumbling'
nah rv dont dont cum 2 c ya battles since,
..............................Your time is the greatest gift you can give someone
good approach, nice punch, a lil funny but strechted.
yall asian kats trash,u aint elivatin most yall like wat 5'2 short?
dam right we got somethin in COMMON,
............................................we both got rid of a NEWPORT
good but narrow the lines down cat.
wit da chrome u fukked,ATL stadium underground ya 'dome gon dukk'
nigga said he got big money...but like george karl he dont own a bukk
aight, ok...decent.
fall bakk homo u fukk wit The Q,prolli was hangin from hiz D-I-C
K u did it cus he that would eat the fruit, must climb the tree
horrible grammar.
stop gossiping 2 deez niggaz like u hot bitch u cant rhyme homez
12:30 n da mornin he n cali im n pa asked him 2 get me a 930,
................................diz dikkhead cums bakk wit caliz timezone
aight bar, but not a good closer.

*ya shit was aight man, im not sayin
it was total garbage, i just think if you
would shorten the lines, throw some
mind thinkers in there it would just kill
all ya opponents, good verse, good battle
well see how hip hop scenes did....


HipHop Scenes:
This kid is wack as shit, so i'll easily leave ya whored then
Its no coincidence you only got votes when you paid for them
best flow ive seen, hard punch
And you aint even loyal to ya fam, so fuck this dumb pig
Cuz since whens it been cool to be from philly & have crypts in ya sig?
wow, nice line.... so far so good.
You're not even a challenge, and fuck it, I'm sorry
But on a dopeness scale your down more then Rb
nah, cause RB has ills.
Your style sucks son, ya whole fasion flairs dead
Cuz whens the last time you seen some one where a bra on their head?
uhh ok... if your referring to his avy, i dont see it.
LOL @ you being serious in that pic, how hot can the sun be..
Ya shades were so big, i thought you were actually tryin to be funny
haha, aight flow + good punch = nice closure.

*um well after reviewing both verses, im
going with hip hop. hhs, ya lines were good
made sense and had a point, you were actually
going somewhere with em, which is not seen
often or at all, so with a good flowin verse and
real good punches, if at all any personals... im
going wit ya.

vote: HipHop Scenes


good verses yall, and good luck to both.
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