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Well this was an iight peice.. i was really feeling it.
It had some nice punchlines
Some were fillers but it was okay.
Alittle short..*Reds hard to read, hate red*
you had nice wordplay, and good vocab ...
Structure was good next time try to match up your bars
Overall nice drop keep it up, seen alot better
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