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Old 04-30-05, 02:58 PM   #33
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

marv's verse:

i won about 20 text battles in a row,so how da best not marv?
typ "getin out of a aFRiCaN JaiL"'s da only time u "LEFT HOT BaRS"
Nice opener. Clean diss. Nice punch

been here 9 month's no1 known's u,goin against me da earn rank
i made typical's moms drink "cum 4 dollar's" now she really a "sprem-bank"
Nice wordplay. Nice punch. Clean Diss

ya bar's suck n ya flows missin,fam u'll neva go gold spittin.
u hand out ya cd 2 dj's but like "hard headed kids" they "dont listen".
Again, good wordplay. Nice diss, Nice punch. Showin some consistency too

go head test-my-click,typical u'll get feed-five-clipps.
when i say u gon be a "john-doe" i mean "dead" not "rich".
Same as the others...First line couldve been better tho

yes im sick!..typ u know u cant flow pass dis fella.
u should of worked at a "bank" cuzz ya SNiTCHiN ass known as a "teller".
nice closer, nice punch. nice wordplay

U came wit some consistency wit your barz in this one, and focused thruout yo whole verse on dissin yo oponent. This verse was flawless i think. Nice wordplay, clean structure, and nice disses.

typical verse:
I’ll be in your hood soon, wit a Bronx cap and clean jeasey
lookin for Marv to smack! cuz I heard he "Queens Early!"
Badly worded, and flow was off...couldve been better

this kids wish is that his balls were big enough to juggle wit
unfortunately, Queens niggaz aint run shit since russle quit!
Eh, nice...Not all that, but nice

To eat me: ud need a bigger plate, of da lie u facilitate
git it strait! Da Bronx began what dis man chants to imitate
vocab was here, but it was still off. Not too good for me

jay feeds like a leach! He’ll kill ur line to inspire da bloody pen
a peach of a Queen, who dont eat niggas rhymes, but study them
Kinda a nice bar, but not at all a good diss

since ur not righteous u mightjust die. like a logs stump.
now u in hell. cuz u sucked Nas, but never listened to God's Son
I think you tried to force a good diss outa this one

[b]yo verse was just ight for me. I seen no consistency in this one. Yo flo was off at tha beginning, but u picked it up near the end, but i think it was too late. Just ight for me(this verse). I think it couldve been wayy better.

I'ma give my vote to marv, becuase like i said, he came wit more consistency, and harder punches. His disses were directly towards typical, where-as, most of typical's disses couldve been towards any queens person. marv gets my vote


RTF...link in sig............one of em, dont matter which one...they gettn slept on, and ya'll kno how slept on battles feel, so hit em up plz. 3 min of ur time.
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