Voted For: hotshh!

marv...
had a hot opener but a crappy second bar...third bar had a good set up and funny punch...forth bar was good wordplay but set up was whack...fifth bar was worded bad n wasnt funny....closer was good but really stretched

hot...
opener should have had better rhyme but it was funny...2nd bar was fuck hurtful...in a good way...third bar was funny as hell once i got it...forth bar was a hard fuckin personel wit ghetto word play...fifth bar was good punchbut dont get gassed...closer made sence but it was very plain to read...
but overall hotshh! had better flow,peresonels, punches,and structure...

vote hotshh!

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