Originally Posted by Fi-Del

good drop, rhymes arent too bad, solid amount of emotion. you should try get more creative , i unno, i lost a bit of interest half way thru it. sorta seemed predictible. try flipping twist's into your drops and they will be dope.

ok drop yo,just try finish it leaving the reader thinking, it seems like you got bored of the topic yourself so quickly started to round it all up and finish it.

still a nice topical yo.

~F-D~