first topical type drop ive read in a while and its plot and direction was kinda given, like it was only ever gonna go one way...for what it was vocab was dope, uve elevated here, some of ur rhymes arent rhymes at all and u wud hav been betta off usin different words, ur structure was ok, imagery was well developed and clear yo, shit was nice all together, id ssay try n b mo creative wid o plots n change-up your rhymeschemes....word..FAV RETURNED

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