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Voted For: SpeatsBeats

ok this was a blah battle overall

Straight Aim- i liked your verse but it was just to bland. your vocab wasnt really up to par with speats and your metaphors were shit . to be honest you need alot of work . the only thing you really had up on was the structure . so up your vocab and work on your punches.. play off of his name or something.

speats. your getting better . i can tell you are struggling with how to deliever your punches . only reason i think your going to take this one . is because you did have better vocab and at least a few punches that somewhat slapped .. not punches i guess lol . but yea work on using bigger words and you coulda made so many jokes with his name... "straight aim" haha but yea you took this because you had a better vocab, punches and some semi creative lines.

vote// speats