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Old 05-01-05, 07:02 PM   #15
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Voted For: Armada Da 187

Welcome to Rv bro, Armada given you a grand welcome
point how much ya lyrcis suck bad, n ways u can perfect em/
Control of your verses....good opener..
Im Gonna hit you hard wit punches, thas how ya live n learn
Like how ya dad smacks you around, now its Armadas Turn/
Nice...
Yooza a lil youngstah to the game, 1 post made today,hark
Also gettin ya first battle n first loss, pretty bad way to start/
good....
these lyrics leave ya body mangled, breakfast for the crows
Ya may have heart, maybe talent, but ur weakness ill expose/
ok....
"who want it" ya said, I replied I do, ya hurried n got offline
say ya dont wanna be ko'ed, save me 10 mintues of my time/
ha......
cuz thas all the longer it'll take me to clearly stomp ya BRO
Put slugs in ya head, cops in ya house, momma cryin, fo sho/
Nah.....
You put the "Bro" in "Broken" cuz thas all you are, ya sucka!!
also put the GAY in this line, cuz ya a GAY ass mother fucker!/
ha....alright...
Gonna make ya first day here, a nightmare that'll haunt ya
couldnt be declared a killer even wit the Make or Break Mafia/
eh.....
Thas pretty sad, cuz in the MOB we all killers by the HEART
Word of Advice, no embarasment,stay offline n NEVA START/
good.....
Unless you a lil bolder, N decide to take bites at Armada foo
lesson to learn: doin that,ull bite off more then ya can chew/
nice.....
leave ya fams decimated,bones crushed to dust,blood ina cup
accept this battle? ya better not, cuz Armada fuckin you up/
good....
shoot to kill, dont believe? you will!, what u think im bluffin? sit back n visualize that they dont call me the 187 for nuttin/
good flow.....
Yooza Punk Bitch n Denial,A Desperate man gone suicidal
I made remedes for that shit, hollowtips, be worth your while/
ok closer...


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yo...u have no lyrical game, i dont feel ya "punches" at all.. i'll quickly dispose this head ache like i was tylonal..
ok.......

this ho prolly bites everybodies lines...
but this aint reading, u wont get better with time..
no......
spends all his time rappin when he knows he's shitty as fuck... when this bitch throws uh "punch"~line no one even ducks..
ok.....
he has no skill wat so ever... this niga disgraces the game..to be how shitty u are u gota be trained..
no.........
his real name should be door mat.. cuz every one walks on this guy..he couldnt "elevate" his "saliva" if he "spit" from the sky..
worded bad, but ok......
this cat should choose better on who he battles next time.. i "heard" better lyrics while watchin uh mime..
uh.........no, it didn't work...
i'll keep the bars comin.. since we all know u have none..
his petty "punches" couldnt hurt me even if they were shot through uh gun..
no...
i'll keep ma self focused while rip this herb ta size..
the only career u have involves"do want any fries?
nah.........played........
y does he try rappin?he know he has no "hands"
i felt better "flow" walkin by uh fan...
eh.....ok closer but it's pretty played..


More control of verses, punchlines and complexity on armada's part, actually felt like a somewhat serious attempt at winning a battle, wheras bro came with some weak punches...
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