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Old 05-01-05, 07:11 PM   #16
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Prez idolizes cassidy but i wont let you bite his lines so stop askin me
I'll formally murder you...the best you could put together was a casualtee
Jesus christ! he uses so many quotes its almost as if someone else had written it
His verse will 'tank' so hard......people will start to put their fish in it

vs.

nothin worth quoting

O.V.= good verse. had some nicew wordplay and
and creative punches. the nes i wouted above were ur best. but tyh toohpasetline and the closer i wasnt feelin it. but overall it was a solid drop

Prez- most of ur verse was filled filler.
and u had some bad attempts at wordplay.
and whn u did have punches they were weak.
and get rid og the bolding and other stuff.
if people dont get ur wordplay then they suck.
anyway elevate man.

v/O.V
and u should join ..The League..
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