Voted For: Limited Edition

OneStep- your fence ish was cool... as well as the closer was feelin that.... but other than that your structure seems a bit stretched, and you just had mediocre punches besides the ones I cited...

Limited Edition- not bad... the Salisbury steak line had me laughin... and the rest were coo... had some coo nameplay in there that was augmented by a good structure and flow...


Vote Limited


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