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alright this was a pretty creative battle .
Daz took this one in my eyes mainly because he had a better vocab and better punches overall. his wordplay really was very nice. i thought that one of your lines was sorta pushed a lil hard but besides that i couldnt really see anything really wrong with it.(its hard to vote on battles like these because there arent that many things some people need to improve on )
solo. i liked your verse but it just seemed to basic. it wasnt as creative as daz's your opener was pretty weak and i really thought the whole thing seemed a lil rushed. but overall i think you could work on your punches and personals. the personals you did have were just blah nothing special. i've seen alot of good things from you but i just wasn't feeling yours. just use a wider variety in your vocab and think of some new harder hitting punches.
vote daz because he came harder with his verse. and it was way more creative than solo's verse
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