meh, i think you strained the vocab a little too much, lol, especially when trying to multie it up.....but overall, i think it was a cool piece, had its own uniqueness to it....the start was fire though man, like i said, i think you used too much vocab at the end of it, which kinda took away from your piece.....emotion and shit....but....

Necessity is possesin me as i press to see why you leave
Instead of blessin me, God's testin me with absolutely no relief
Darkness as my hearts stressed, I'm pressed to progress
But this mess is kept, never left, even after I slept
On my mind all the time, I climb to levels of hope and despair
Am I blind? Missing signs? I'm trying to grow and repair

^ wow, that was f'in hot man, so much emotion/imagery, loving it....definately keep up yo....good drop

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