This was a nice piece. Creative topic fasho. The flow was good for the most part, choppy in areas. Multis were good and used at right points. Vocab was basic but it doesnt matter much. You stayed on topic, never rambled off. Some nice imagery but not much of it. So keep working at using deep words for imagery. But in a piece like this that is tough to do. Anyways cool drop man.

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