Voted For: MaD_KnighT

Verbal

Mad hails from the West, so I slap him in the east direction...
Cuz his pussy flows couldn't be sick if they developed a yeast infection..
^hehe, nice opener

Mad Knight? Yeah right..........this clown's a Jester, it's settled..
I'll rip up this fag's heart faster than high cholesterol levels...
^coo wordplay in second line, no punch though

Rapping's not your thing.....drop the mic and quit fakin...
Cuz you're an underground rapper....in terms of elevation..
^okaycloser

Good verse, your opener was straight fire but too bad you couldn't keep it up at that pace. The second bar was some nice wordplay and stuff but there was no real punch in my opinion. Closer was good, especially the last line but it lacked creativity. As far as vocab, structure and flow are concerned...I can't give any comments on that but what wins battles are personals and hardhitting punches and I only found that in your opener.


MaD KnighT

Fuck me we all know dat ur rhymes are so unstable......
Now its time 2 break ur legs in 2 and turn da table.......
^decent opener but no punch

To break me is in-possible you wasting lifes pure n simple breath.....
Cuz meta's get sent to ya sooner than kids getting into oy chest!...
^good wordplay and a punch in second line
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You suck on the mic, maybe literally coz we all no u suck dick.......
Get fucked quick cuz uve been in this prediciment once, give up kid
^nice closer

Also a good verse, unlike Verbal your opener was kinda weak but you picked up the pace towards the ending. Second bar had some nice vocab, good wordplay which you worked out into a hardhitting punch (second line). The last bar wasn't overely creative with the suck dick part but I feel you also hit him hard with this punch. No personalsthough but neither one of you had those. Vocab was good, some multis in there which improved your flow. Structure was good as well.

In the end my vote goes to MaD KnighT because I feel he was a bit more consistent with the punches even though you both can work on that, if you only do 6 lines people expect them to all be hardhitting and straight fire. Get that better nex time, no hate btw, just here to help...

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