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Voted For: AutoMatik
AutoMatik
My Lyrical Verbalness Be Putting you in Physical Tournquites...
I Murk A Bitch You Work Wit It Evaporate A Fagget Who Dont Deserve To Spit….
^liking second line, first one's bleh
How The Hell You Gonna Test Me Fool? Grab The Gat Then Let It Go...
Bullets In Ya Neck And Skull...Then Another One In Ya Chest And Soul.…
^no real punch
Yeah You Know The Berretias Cold But Whats More Deadly Is My Best Of Flows...
Now You In The Hospital For Haveing More Seamen In Ya Mouth Then In Ya Testicals!!!!(ouch)
^hehe,lmao @ last line, first bit self-glorification though
Good verse, had some nice punches and wordplay. Bit self-glorification here and there and no real personals but you made up for that by your creative wordplay and punches. Vocab was outstanding, had your flow on due to some multis and the structure was cool.
Daubs
So slow to make your spit...yet you claim your "AutoMatik"
Shit you must be blind aswel as new...coz you cant read a line limit!!
^nice personal right here!
Say you not a newbie, then the symptoms must flash right past your eyes..
How can you have overcome it...........WHEN YOU still CAP RANDOM LINES!!
^uhm, no real punch in my opinion, just not feeling it ya kno...
And as for your "owned list", only got one person whos a downsydromed kid,
Ya record aint even legit..........for the only win ya got...you cheated!!
^coo coo, bit played though
Nice verse here as well, I especially liked your opener because it was a nicely worded personal that hit hard. Too bad you couldn't really stay consistent with those. Not exactly feeling the second bar, can't really explain it...I just don't see the punch and not too good wordplay either, it's so random. Then the last bar was cool but it has been used several times in fact, same as the retard-jokes. So maybe lacked bit of creativity but overall had nice personal, good punch in last. Structure was nice as well as flow, vocab was bit less compared to AutoMatik's.
Vote goes to AutoMatik because I feel he got more creativity in his lines, no hate Daubs, you know I got nothin but respect for you but it was close battle...
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