i can c some elevtion in ur vocab DQ...and u usd vocab effectively..structure was concise...imagery was there, kinda predictable images in places, u defo created a good picture of summer and the emotions that come along wih it.poem was littered wid metas but lacked similies..adding the background pic was a nice touch,,,keep em comin gal..

(oh P.S - ur fine as helllllll, Lmao)

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