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Old 05-02-05, 01:03 PM   #22
Adrenaline
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it was aiight...I like the concept of the song...following the dre & em thing...it was aiight Id say...it wasn't all that..I think u could have put more effort in this, for example some rhymes was pretty obvious and nuttin too insightful just simple schemes used...
vocabulary could have been used as well as wordplay...multis was aiight though...keep it up...
and if u haven't checked "MY ABC's" yet then do so...it's an om
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