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Old 05-02-05, 01:32 PM   #22
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Voted For: Tony Green

Tony Green:
A reali reali tite verse. I really like all of it..........
Sum reali tite punches but u dont really need 2 explain ya punches it makes it sound herbish which it aint.......
Try keep ur lines the same lengh........
But a real tite verse..........
=8/10

.:Fate:.
A real good structure 2 this verse but i wosnt really feelin da verse as a whole.There were alot of really good punches but a lot of wack one's. No hate though fam..........
=7/10

V/Tony Green for having sum really tite punches............

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