Strongest aspect of your piece was the imagery without a doubt and also how you defined those teardrops in various ways. The vocabulary was excellent as usual but I love how your words never affect the content of the poem or the message you want to convert. This isn't an emotional type of poem but more of an insightful one and you really brought your top game when it comes to the deeper lines. Made me stop and think about some things here and there. I love reading your pieces due to your writing style, even though it was a long read you managed to keep the readers focussed thanks to your vivid way of description.

Nice piece fam

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