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Old 05-02-05, 04:36 PM   #12
Frank~Castle
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Voted For: Verbal

I felt verbal took it by a hair...heres tha break down!
structure-verbal(I doubt you own a gun, but I'm sure that you've 'packed shit'
So I'll cut out this fag's tongue and give him a new accent..)
wordplay-Automatic(Im Smashin This Ass, Torchin Your Names Bashin You Fast......
Nd I'll Take Your 'Shots' With 'Vodka' As If I Was 'Brakin The Glass......)
punchlines-verbal(You're clumsy with weaponry, so don't talk about automatics..
Because I'll shoot up your crib like baby heroin addicts...)
personals-Automatic(Nd Your Rhymes Weak, Beat Me? Nah, Cus Hes Bragin Over A '3 Battle Win Streak?......)
but overall:...Verbal..he got more punches to connect..
Auto..You had some good multi's but lacked in good punches..thats it.

Really this battle was nice..keep elevatin!!

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