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Old 05-02-05, 06:03 PM   #45
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

RETURN THE FAVOR

pretty hot battle here, yall both came with some nice drops
but ima go wit MarvJay on this one. I was feelin his verse more, it was more complex, and easy to understand at the same time. Plus the punches in his joint were better in my mind and hit harder.

Marv Jay- nice verse from you, you really brought that fire in this battle. some pretty good punches, and really nice multies helpd ya verse flow real well. had some good creative lines in there makin ya shit more thorough sounding
*Marv Jays best bar*=
no1 stopin dis bastard!,u lyin 2 ppl on rv hot ur an actress go hop in a casket.
u wouldn't have a "buzz in da hood" if u put ya "intercom on da top of ya jacket".
^^hot shit, my fav bar of your verse good delivery n erething

hotshh!-pretty good verse from you, didn't like ya opener tho, and some of your punches didn't really land. you had decent-good flow and nice structure. could have come harder wit some better multies tho, maybe that woulda upped ya verse's quality a lil more. but overall pretty good verse from you.
*hotshh! best bar*=
I done whored em in multi's, but marv smoke weed, i can Tell
Cause he came back for seconds..... and left with another "L"
^i liked this punch, nice set up and goo delivery, hit pretty hard

overal=marv got my verse, his punches was just hittin harder and i liked his multies better. good shit from both
PLEASE HIT ME BACK!! return the favor, links are in theSIG
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