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Old 05-02-05, 06:12 PM   #14
LyricalMa$tamind
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Voted For: AutoMatik

AUTOMATIK

Im Smashin This Ass, Torchin Your Names Bashin You Fast......
Nd I'll Take Your 'Shots' With 'Vodka' As If I Was 'Brakin The Glass......
^^^DECENT OPENER
Aint Stop When I Blast, Ready To Die Soldier Theif This Win Like Someone Stole Her.....
Nd He Wouldnt Be Able To 'Katch Up' Even If I Put You On My Burger.....
^^^LOL MADE ME LAUGH GOOD 1
Step In The Ring IM Like Werd Herb, Then Destroy Your Spinal Cord.....
Nd Leave Your Chest With A Wider Hole, Then I'll 'Pop Shells, Like Sick Kids With 'Tylonal......
^^^NICE LINE
You Aint 'Standin A Chance' To Win Geek, Like 'I Cut Of Your Legs......
Nd Your Rhymes Weak, Beat Me? Nah, Cus Hes Bragin Over A '3 Battle Win Streak?......
^^^IIGHT CLOSURE

OVERALL I LIKED UR VERSE. THERE WUZ LOTZ OF NICE PUNCHES AND PERSONALS IN DERE. UR STRUCTURE WUZ GOOD N U R ELEVATIN GREAT. KEEP UP DA GOOD WORK HOMIE
GREAT VERSE 4 A NEWB
FAV LINE: "Aint Stop When I Blast, Ready To Die Soldier Theif This Win Like Someone Stole Her.....
Nd He Wouldnt Be Able To 'Katch Up' Even If I Put You On My Burger..... "
8/10

VERBAL

I feel like I'm roughing up a retard, sparring with you...
Kid, you couldn't spit heat at a Mongolian barbeque...
^^^GREAT OPENER
Trust me, your frees are ugly and your rhymes can't bust me..
Cuz the verses you spit are full of shit, like Huggies..
^^^SHIT LINES.....PLAYED
I doubt you own a gun, but I'm sure that you've 'packed shit'
So I'll cut out this fag's tongue and give him a new accent..
^^^NICE LINE
You're clumsy with weaponry, so don't talk about automatics..
Because I'll shoot up your crib like baby heroin addicts...
^^^HA HA GOOD LINE MADE ME LAUGH
I'll stay silent and still merk you...and let the weapons talk for me...
Stick an 'L' in your bloody corpse and leave you with a sense of 'gLory'*
^^^MEH IIGHT CLOSURE

THIS WUZ A CLOSE ASS BATTLE TO CALL

VERBAL- I LIKED UR VERSE ALOT TOO.THERE WERE LOTZ OF PUNCHES AND PERSONALS HIT HARD. U HAD A NICE STRUCTURE AS WELL. U R GETTIN MUCH BETTA HOMIE.I LIKE UR WORK. KEEP ELEVATIN U R DOIN MUCH BETTA
FAV LINE:"You're clumsy with weaponry, so don't talk about automatics..
Because I'll shoot up your crib like baby heroin addicts..."
7.5/10

NO HATE JUS VOTIN
LIKE I SAID B4 GOOD ASS BATTLE B/W BOF YALL BUT MAH VOTE GON HAVE 2 GO 2
.........................AUTOMATIK

STAY UP YALL N KEEP ELEVATIN
..............1
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