Voted For: Elementality

SexyChix- Too many shit lines, cliche, not enough originality, no structure...you had some decent concepts, but instead of making them original, you just used played set-up and punches that were really too basic to be good. Work on the structure and how to clean up your punches.

OK line:
U know that true, whats with the Name???,
Theres about 6 ppl on this site with that, your all the same!!!

Elementality- OK, seems like you actually comprehended the fact that this was a battle and not Freestyling on Sesame Street...There was an actual structure to your shit and some ok punches, plus personals. All you need to win this one...
Best line:
Your only 14 years old kid, quit workn the streets
Shes so young she still wakes up to wet bed sheets

RTF, I need some votes if you can..

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