Slobk: Okay your verse was cool. Most of your lines werent that great. You need to work on wording you meta's better and getting some witty punches. But you elevating so its all good. You had 2 bars that were decent. The flow was alright in yah verse. Just keep working at it.

Stupid Fag..Yo I Have Never Seen An Ignorant Fool This Bad!!!..
"Snype Ur Home" Away From U..So U Have "No Room" To Brag..
Push Me? Makin Me "Break A Tear" Is Da Only Way Ull "Move Me"..
U Don Get Pussy..Cuz Casper Only Gets Bitches In Movies!!!..

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Casper: Your verse was a smoother read without all those ' ' things around the words and shit. So thats a plus. Flow was good throughout. Punches were more direct than his and hit harder. Same amount of quotables but yours were better.

uh-oh hear comez tha expected,"dog your a friendly ghost"....
what tha fukk is this a contest,on who can say it tha most.....
thing is this guys obese,he just adds a k at tha end....
either that or you find spellin to hard to comprehend.....

v/ Ca$per

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