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Old 05-02-05, 06:52 PM   #14
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Voted For: SpeatsBeats

Straight Aim: Wow. Your verse had nothing. It was baby punches. You need to get metaphores, witty concepts, and some wordplay. Dont just say that he's gay and falls on his butt. Thats horrible. You had no quotables. Your flow was choppy too.

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SpeatsBeats: geeze at least this was an evenly matched battle. Anyways, yours flowed better than his. Your structure at the beginning was gay so dont do that anymore. Punches were the same as his, weak. How do u expect to diss him sayin if Jesus taught u rap u'd be peaceful. Thats not a battle verse! Thought one line stood out in the battle that came from your verse. It wasnt amazing but at least you had a punch. And It got you the win.

I did this while doing 5 other things the at same time
And your still consentrating for an hour on the same line?

V/ SpeatsBeats
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