Voted For: Tephlon

Mistah A Got u to battle?
.........................,,,,,,.your runnin a pussy ass crew
just ask Mizz Fyre.........even she's ashamed of you!!!!
OK personal.......isn't Fyre in your clique?
i rest my case in 2 lines, so i'll just waste these next four
cause the only ''hot text'' u ever have is cyberin your whore!
OK...
callin yourself a respectable head?...
......................................please tell me that aint a fact??
i got approched by this whack, because opposites attract!
OK closer...

could sit u n a room labeled 1 and give u a hall pass
u can leave n comeback and still wouldnt be in the first class(1)
Set up was too elaborate for the punch..
ima cause lyrical supression to this manz RV obsession(2)
give em a radar,he still aint detectin this subliminal message
No...
This kid is seriously wack for his amount of RV experience
he bitches more than girls on they monthly menstrals...period..(3)
Played, but OK personal..

Teph- OK, nothing special...decent closer and opener...at least you rhymed..

Judicial- 2nd bar was filler....didn't rhyme...opener was too stretched out to be an effective punch, last bar was played, could have come up with better analogy than menstrual bitches..just in my opinion...just some work on the structure and some more original concepts needed..


Just my honest vote...RTF

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