Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

o.k average battle really but not bad....

kin - o.k man you bring alot of multi's to ya verse and im feelin that and ur structure doesn't bother me as long as its simple enough to flow to which its is, ya flow was dope, flawless due to the strong multis, however i think your punches lacked in places due to insertin these multis, the pokemon line was abit of a none event didnt mean much, not really a play on his name cos your only usin part of it, but overall it was a nice verse i liked the closer in both ya first and third bars.....

typical - o.k man first off ya structure is a little out but blah its flowin to me mostly, opener is not bad but not great either heard this concept before and the closer was quite creative and avoided bein played, but between that it all went wrong ya punches just weren't hittin just thought ya fell off, again plenty of multi's makin it a gud read but basically kin got ya here

verdict - kin gets this on the whole it was a beta all round verse, just thought i'd leave some decent feed for both

please can ya both return the fav on the link below seein as i did take some time on this, thx
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...127224&posted=1

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