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Old 05-03-05, 02:45 PM   #10
.:Jack Rackam:.
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i could sit u n a room labeled 1 and give u a hall pass
u can leave n comeback and still wouldnt be in the first class(1)
^^good opener,1st ine partial filler but decent setup,
good personal and crew nameplay..lil simple..decent..6.5/10

ima cause lyrical supression to this manz RV obsession(2)
give em a radar,he still aint detectin this subliminal message
^^1st line couldve been way better,weak setup
get more complex with your setups fam...2nd line was a
decent concept but it wasnt delivered very good....5/10

This kid is seriously wack for his amount of RV experience
he bitches more than girls on they monthly menstrals...period..(3)

^^seemed forced, periods, kinda played in the way you used it, really wasnt liking the forced ryhme scheme in your bars..
with more inners or assonasance ryhmes it wouldve been much better man......5/10
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16.5/30
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Mistah A Got u to battle?
.........................,,,,,,.your runnin a pussy ass crew
just ask Mizz Fyre.........even she's ashamed of you!!!!
^^weak setup,...ok punch, but its not very creative.6/10
very short lines, you couldve been much more complex.

i rest my case in 2 lines, so i'll just waste these next four
cause the only ''hot text'' u ever have is cyberin your whore!
^^this was koo,..good meta, decent setup, 6.5/10
only thing wrong with it is its not direct.....
callin yourself a respectable head?...
......................................please tell me that aint a fact??
i got approched by this whack, because opposites attract!
^^closer did it for me, good meta, goodsetup...
dont know why you feel you havta use all the periods
in your verse thou,.........
.overall, better creativity and overall better punches
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return the favour in the sig.no hate

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