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Old 05-03-05, 02:46 PM   #12
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From: DETROIT IN DIS BITCH!!!
IP:

Voted For: Premanition

vote gotz ta got to prem...consistant lines dat actually made since...

shard:
IP:


you lackin' ammunition Preman you on some Pre man shit
man if you take away this kid's facade..it'll just deman him
derailin' this cat so far...his bitch ass will never see mention
he has a train of thought... n' that shit has a steam engine!
^^i read dat and was like "damn!!!"...but afta this it was straight ass man...no hate but it wasnt doin much

prem:
Bitch them lines getting rejected like a faulty bar code
And you ain’t be’coming a custom’ like a dodgy car load
Sold ur soul to the devel but he turned down the exchange
Shard my ‘sole’ on ur level in a place where gravity reigns
^^now dats hotness right there...prem shit stayed still as far as delievery...simple

basically, shard, u gotta elevate tha same way i gotz too...ya verse against me was betta than dis...6/10 overall for u

prem...man dat was iight...i dont think dats ya best battle shit tho...sum shit could have been harder...still hot...8/10

struc-tie
vocab-prem
flow-prem
punches-prem
creativity-prem

overall: 7.5/10...iight battle

v-prem

RETURN THA FAVA...LINK IN SIG!!!
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