lol...listenign now..........

damn beat is coo..a bit slow tho 4 a rap flow..
lyrically its nice, can tell u took time ova te content..ur flow is off a lil bit..ur not hittin the snare on the end of ur lines consistently....quality is a bit shaky, some bits sound clear n others r a bit fuzzy, thers no real hiss...ur emotion come sthru well..nice spielberg line

id say up ur quality - beta equip
work on ur flow, probs use a easier beat yo..write to da beat n try n hit the snares

keep droppin

RTF link in sig mad dog v acuity..peace

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