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Old 05-03-05, 03:10 PM   #23
Acuity
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Voted For: Daubs

VOTE : Dabus



Push this bitch aside, like a plough through thick snow..
Post a verse when its accepted??
Then that decision you selected wasnt the best...as you lost by a no-show!!
ok opener, a waste of a line/two in ur set -up, hits hard tho -7.5/10
When you called me out, i didn't set a battle, i set-a-war...
We know you want to be something else....hence the metaphor!!
Dopeness bredrin, nice set-up , flowed well, dope personal n wordplay on the name - 9/10
I must be clever like a statition or even a mathmatician see..
Because il turn your battle numbers...into multiples of three!!
nice and creative, sort of a personal, dcent closer - 8/10



This guy duabs aint 2-0,he just reset his record/
ima enjoy this win over u like trojans,its just my pleasure/
u got a personal COMMENt but theres no diss..-6/10.
this dick won a few battles,so now he wanna get little cocky/
so ima run steps up this niggas face,like rocky/
rocky punches r played n this was not hard hittin -6/10
and i got heat that'll take your, sleeves off like summer time/
and you the type of nigga that wish he could flow some of time/
dissed him this bar..a bit more..acts as a filler no real hard httin content, also flow is off - 6.5/10
only burner you saw,was on the top of your stove/
dont post just dissapear like,a magic show/
best bar of drop, better flow, nuttin original, hard hittin tho - 7.5/10

Daubs - work on structure
Metaphor - work on dissin and creativeness

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