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This was an iight peice.. it could have been alot better
I felt that you werent really grasping the concept very well , you were
talking about several different things.. You had some nice comparisions
Okay wordplay , and pretty decent vocab , Structure was good
Alittle short but good, This had alot of feeling it , and
Nice emotions , really wasnt fitting the topic, but it was a good drop
Had nice imagery too... really good peice.. next time try to
stay on the topic , and now talk about other stuff..
Overall keep it up , and hope to see another drop from you soon
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