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This was a pretty dope drop.. One of the best ive seen from
you adrenaline , i liked the comparision's you put in your drop
You had nice emotions , good feeling, some nice vocab
I felt you could have choose your worden alittle bettter. not have been some simple
Your structure was good , like how you were fighten death..
Best line of the drop i would have to say was:
"own more lives" than "slavery",death's face u'll hate to see
and if ur life is a "dream" then that means u "wake" to me
Im a feelin u just cant stop,the rush will have u "rocked"
it's like gettin "stone-dashed" by folks who chasin cops
nice this was a good bar...i was really feeling it ...
Overall good drop ... keep it up , and i hope to see some more from you
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