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Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.
Jack Rackam verse
Your text’s outlandish ? …….So let me understand this
Becuz you put a few words together,
………………………..you think you on a roll like a sandwich?
^ Nice opener good punch
you drop, please i laugh at this,. it aint a hassle to bash this kid
mash ya steps and vanquish hits, … cuz hes a fuckin paci-FIST
^ lol good bar like the paci-fist bit
the task aint mental, its like movin pyrimids," seperatin ya temples"
ya grills a rental...really ask the dentist... ya birth was ask-a-dental
^ lol decent wordplay good bar
leave you with pains and scars, its true your names lame by-far
and same wit bars, cuz i wont let a-ladd-in like my name was jafar
^ lol good bar my boy loves Aladdin lol
don’t mention you more, with intention of gore ill rip this whore
cuz intellect couldn’t turn the tables
…………………….If he was funkmaster flex in a furniture store!
^ lol decent closer
Overall
Decent 5 bars nice flow don't feel the 3 line thing but they were good bars anyway so i kinda ignored it on this occasion flow was good overall nice verse
Intellect
aint gotta be a baseball junkie to know ya average mark..
but we've seen ya home runs... along the trailor park.
^ opener ain't strong coulda been better
face it bitch.. ya rhymes is old school .. stuck in '01 ..
no one feelin ya 5 year old shit .. 'cept for micheal jackson..
^ Played
queer ass bitch, finally aint gunna get a handed win ..
& since its back to square one, we all payin attention to u again.
^ win & again = weak rhyme
havin fun again.. your identity speaks for itself cus..
on ya way to the top? shit, now thats Jacked up.
^ flip on name but wording coulda been better
you's an ugly nigga g .. and i'm only being bleak..
cus before you entered this .. it was a good lookin league.
^ closer aight personal but n word really ain't needed
Overall
Verse coulda been better nice flow and struc but i think thats all it won it on really Jack gets my vote for stronger punches and personals
RTF in my sig...3 days to RTF or vote removed
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Originally Posted by High Dro
furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born
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^ Amen Brother ^
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Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.
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R.I.P OMB
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