Voted For: ..Decree..

..Decree.. verse

I'm eclipsen this kid like tha sun moon an stars...
his flows choopy..homo...like "pickup" lines at gay bars...
^ played opener

he has no punches just fillers thicker than venis..
willams hips..i know he swings to tha left like R rated's penis..(crooked!)
^ more of a diss at R-Rated and thats played too

with all this wordplay i got his head "buzzin" like wes niles...
virus..cause he showin up "sleepy" for this battle like jackos trials...
^ Jacko...but on a recent topic better bar

i know he a "pee wee" an fucks wit "her-man"then hollas rape..
cause this kids verse is more "anal" than paris on her sex tape..
^ Nice closer...gave me a nice image of Paris Hilton...

Overall
Started sloppy wit some played bars but picked up all in all a good verse kept it nice on the flow & structure good verse to the end

FLiPakaJR's verse

let me rip open my body, get a good look inside who you facin
deliver rhymez connected bombz, explode text to get dem shakin//
^ no punch no personal...no diss...wack opener

8 linez pentrated to ya face, but worse than michael jackson
dis heavyweight put pressure so decree can't hold dis ton//
^ self-g blah[b]

accepted battle with torment, like lil kidz in football gamez
never take a glimpse back at you like old throw back fame//
[b]^ attempted punch hit = minor coulda been better

I bring pain in da conclusion, i body out your whole verse,
why bring it and still come(cum) when your a bitches mouth who still thirst//
^ weak closer

Overall
Not a good verse you A need to work on punches a lot was played and not there you need to diss your guy in a battle it's what you do. B lose the // thing it's wack and makes ya verse look more newb than it's coming across...keep at it you'll get better as time goes on

v/Decree...RTF in my sig 3 days or vote removed


Vote requested by Mad Dog to be removed because no one RTF the vote

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