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Old 05-03-05, 07:47 PM   #19
Germ
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word, i thought mixtapes was more of a poem, and kinda threw of flow.....but not bad, doe bags, a little more anger in his, but mixed up the tone a bit, which was good....i thought LFS had the best imagery/emotion, but your lines were a little long, but you used nice vocab, which is good.......overall, this was decent, each brought a different view/aspect which was refreshing.....3 different writing styles, brought together to make a decent open mic, keep up all
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