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Old 05-03-05, 09:23 PM   #13
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Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

Jack:
Your text’s outlandish ? …….So let me understand this
Becuz you put a few words together,
………………………..you think you on a roll like a sandwich?
ok, word better, 6/10
you drop, please i laugh at this,. it aint a hassle to bash this kid
mash ya steps and vanquish hits, … cuz hes a fuckin paci-FIST
coo wordplay, mmm I found it lacked though 5/10
the task aint mental, its like movin pyrimids," seperatin ya temples"
ya grills a rental...really ask the dentist... ya birth was ask-a-dental
ohhh snap, best bar 10/10
leave you with pains and scars, its true your names lame by-far
and same wit bars, cuz i wont let a-ladd-in like my name was jafar
good wordplay, punch lacked, 5/10
don’t mention you more, with intention of gore ill rip this whore
cuz intellect couldn’t turn the tables
…………………….If he was funkmaster flex in a furniture store!
lol dope, 8/10
34/50

Intellect:
aint gotta be a baseball junkie to know ya average mark..
but we've seen ya home runs... along the trailor park.
ohohohoho, that was nice. 9/10
face it bitch.. ya rhymes is old school .. stuck in '01 ..
no one feelin ya 5 year old shit .. 'cept for micheal jackson..
no punch, played, sry very bad, 0/10
queer ass bitch, finally aint gunna get a handed win ..
& since its back to square one, we all payin attention to u again.
ahaha, you must be an alias, dope bar, 7/10
havin fun again.. your identity speaks for itself cus..
on ya way to the top? shit, now thats Jacked up.
I get it, but I didnt like it 2/10
you's an ugly nigga g .. and i'm only being bleak..
cus before you entered this .. it was a good lookin league.
blah, not that good, 4/10

22/50
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