Flyweight
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lol, dont explain what ur lines mean and fix ur structure.. its newbish..
also, its not long enough but eh your newbish...
this really needs to be longer, you did a good job glorifying yourself but if you brought this to battle you'd get wrecked because you need punchlines for a battle.. decent flow though and not terrible vocab, you have potential just keep working at it..
pz
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