aight now ima actualy give u sum feedback n listen to this track instead of bein a duesche n cloggin ur threads with nonsence. aight. beat of course is diferent. dont like tha sample. kinda fruity but its not u thats jus how tha song came im sure. n e ways. diff flow here. u switch tempos alot. sumtimes it sounds aight sumtimes it falls off n duznt fit. hmmm i didnt hear n e real punches or n e wordplay just straight regualr lyrics which isnt bad but its not outta tha norm. i mean tha concept is but tha lyrics are just. meh ya kno? i was actualy planning to do sumthin like this. not over a beat quite as fruity as this but on a beat with some melodic guitars or sumn. just waitin to hear one i like. kinda short on the verses. hmmm i dunno what to say about this track. it comes from tha heart i gues... i dont like ur adlibs tho. u need to tone down the "jeahs" lol dunno just tedious to me. this aint sumthin thats "never been done before"like u said. dzk rips these kinda beats all tha time. so do alota artists. this track was hyped up by all tha ppl on here b4 i listened to it sayin its ur best track yet so i had hi hopes but it kinda let me down. i mean it wasnt terrible cuz it WAS sumthin new from u. glad to see ur tryin new shit cuz thats what counts. but this wasnt a "wonderfull" track. shit was just meh.

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