hmm, structures off, you got good vocab
i dont get why you dont take an extra 5 min
and work on some of your concepts...
their there, maybe you just not seeing them?
non the less, put more effort into your om's and
you'll get positive feedback.....
just try n keep ya shit even n not so choppy.pz

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!