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Old 05-04-05, 01:12 AM   #2
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this was decent for a keytyle, some of it didn't make sense sometimes and ya flow kinda was off and on also. but i liked this bar here
Grab the gas and matches a lyrical difraction
Leave ya body in fractions , i explode like a chemical reaction
ya need to work on ya flow tho, alot of ya bars sounded choppy and sometimes it seemed like u just tried to put in big words as filler, unless thats your style. idk go wit what u want,only problem i see is ya flow, and maybe a lil better punches. but overall i give it a 7/10
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